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Old 04-22-2009, 04:38 PM
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OK I'm going to try to start an online story here. I've done these every now and then for over 25 years ever since the old BBS days before the web. The idea is to create a story one sentence at a time. These stories can get really wild after a while. Everyone can contribute, but you can't do two posts in a row unless there has been 24 hours in between.

Here are the ground rules: No profanity. You can create characters at will, but try to make them believable. Don't come in and kill off all the folks in the story just to screw thing up. Don't conclude the story. Beyond that, let's just have some fun!

If this takes off well, I'll compile the story into one post every few days.


Ok here goes--------


It was a hot day in the city, the kind of day where sweat rolls down the middle of your back, and even the pidgeons in the park hide in the shade.
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Old 04-22-2009, 05:13 PM
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OK I'm going to try to start an online story here. I've done these every now and then for over 25 years ever since the old BBS days before the web. The idea is to create a story one sentence at a time. These stories can get really wild after a while. Everyone can contribute, but you can't do two posts in a row unless there has been 24 hours in between.

Here are the ground rules: No profanity. You can create characters at will, but try to make them believable. Don't come in and kill off all the folks in the story just to screw thing up. Don't conclude the story. Beyond that, let's just have some fun!

If this takes off well, I'll compile the story into one post every few days.


Ok here goes--------


It was a hot day in the city, the kind of day where sweat rolls down the middle of your back, and even the pidgeons in the park hide in the shade.
A redneck found refuge from the sun underneath a large pickup truck after his weekly trip to walmart while an incoherant battalion of rebelious swahili elves brewed in the sewers beneath him.
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Old 04-23-2009, 08:43 AM
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then suddenly he was distracted by the valuptuous breasts bouncing up and down of his sister running through the park.
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And he had thought "she's my step sister, I can hit that" as he got an erection...

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So he called to her... "Carol Anne, gimme some poon!" To which she replied "I'm on my way to the dentist, seems they have a 2 for one deal!"

banjo starts playing a love song

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Old 04-23-2009, 12:46 PM
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Aawwww come on guys. I'm trying to start a real story here, and you are turning it into instant porn. The idea is to produce a story that is readable when put together WITHOUT having to chase the children from the room first. Plus, only one sentence at a time please. These things can really be fun if you give them a real chance. Let's try this again.


Erase, erase, erase, erase!

New Start!



The waves crashed loudly in his ears as he slowly regained conciousness to find himself on what apeared to be a desolate and deserted beach.
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The waves crashed loudly in his ears as he slowly regained conciousness to find himself on what apeared to be a desolate and deserted beach.
His camo makeup was smeared but the M16 was still fully functional.
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His camo makeup was smeared but the M16 was still fully functional.
As he got up and looked around, he realized he was on a small island off the coast of Fiji. easily recognizable by the large man shaped volcano in the center.
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He reached for his cigarettes in his shirt pocket only to find his last three ruined by the water.
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Tossing the cigarettes on the ground as he stood up, he says to himself sarcastically,
"I wonder where the 7-11 is around here"
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As he surveyed his surroundings, he slowly realized that he might be the only member of his insertion team to survive the explosion that sank the modified patrol boat they had been givin for this mission.
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"Well, this has got to be the right island" he thought to himself as he wondered how he could complete his mission alone.
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While he quickly made his way to the cover of the thick jungle bordering the beach, his mind went back to how this all started just three weeks before.........
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April 4th, 2009 the General gets a call at 2am. The voice on the other end says just one thing,
"They were headed out to retrevie the package, but radio contact was lost. We also lost radar signal"
The General hangs up the phone, and sits up at the side of the bed.
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BUZZZZZZ!!! (Foul, carrying the ball. More than one sentence.)
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